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Caffiends Asylum
We're just that sick
Reviewer: Anony (Anonymous) · Date: 19/07/10 - 04:00 am · On: I'm Okay Alone

oh my god, you have no idea how excited i was when i saw this sequel posted!!! And it is awesome!

And that is such a perfect backstory for Zane, I adore it!

Sad but sweet with funny mixed in. LOVE!

Reviewer: Tamda (Anonymous) · Date: 22/10/09 - 12:02 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

Oh wow. I think I am going to have to print and keep this.
This was awesome and truly a wonderful look a the world as it might have been.
At Rodney Ingram McKay, whom his sister called Meredith.

At a John and Rodney love story that was more about what they didn't say. That was really about life, and living it. That was about a kid, and the future.

Beautiful job and a wonderful way of conveying all these emotions Rodney and John get to share with us, and eventually each other.

Reviewer: Mrie (Anonymous) · Date: 08/06/09 - 01:14 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

"YAY YAY YAY!"

Exactly. ;)

Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: 16/04/09 - 09:13 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

:) This is way made of awesome

Reviewer: gail19 (Anonymous) · Date: 02/02/09 - 07:00 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

Saw this listed on delicious.

There is a part of me that went Noooooooooo all the way through because Atlantis without John and Rodney is just wrong, but you guys made is so very right.

Reviewer: Gillian (Anonymous) · Date: 06/10/08 - 07:36 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

Wonderful story! I was a bit unsure in the beginning - but then it all came together beautifully. Rodney is such a lovely Dad - it would be great to see more in this 'verse.

Reviewer: korilian (Anonymous) · Date: 04/09/08 - 07:51 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

The cute starts with RAPE... I accept that. Squeee!

Reviewer: Mighty (Anonymous) · Date: 23/08/08 - 05:42 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

Okay...this...this is seriously freaking awesome in ways YOU WOULD NOT FREAKING BELIEVE!! Seriously...I'm...I'm awed and reverent and totally blissed out by how fantastic this was. The premise totally slayed me. (And I am a total whore for female!Rodney so i don't how how much that says about me or not) but this was fantastically written and beautifully played out, I loveloveloved Mer transitioning to Rodney but always still being Rodney. And John who really is very intelligent and bafflingly stupid at the same time and totally oblivious.

And of course Rodney who is a little achey and a lot heartbroken and so...nervous about everything but slowly still somehow himself. (and the few sex scenes were...exceedingly hot and just kinda shoved me into the plot even more)
And I...I seriously...I am in such complete and total love with this fic it's obscene.

Reviewer: Raincitygirl (Anonymous) · Date: 29/06/08 - 02:21 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

this is adorable!

Reviewer: xenocrate (Anonymous) · Date: 21/06/08 - 06:50 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

I adore this. Painful, genuine and sweet at the same time, with a lovely realism to some of the later scenes. Thank you.

Reviewer: Conny (Anonymous) · Date: 06/06/08 - 05:43 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

Wow...this is one of the best... no. it is the best (m)preg story i´ve ever seen... and i´ve seen a lot (and read it naturally ;)). Go on with it...I love your au-stories quite a lot... :))

Reviewer: mystic (Anonymous) · Date: 24/05/08 - 10:38 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

Wow, what a great story. A touch of SciFi and lots of angst and a great ending. Good stuff! Keep them coming along.
(Ps. I understand the reason behind security codes, but could you clear it up, I have poor vision and it takes me several attempts to leave a review)

Reviewer: reen212000 (Anonymous) · Date: 21/05/08 - 07:44 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

Where on Earth do I start?

1. THANK YOU! The one thing that keeps me from reading mpreg is the inevitable baby girl. Not that it's a bad thing. But, seriously, they are always girls. Zane is a beautiful creature.

2. The awkwardness between Rodney and especially John was funny and sad and wonderful.

3. John's numerous little freak outs were well done; I don't even know what I'd do if I saw a little me runnin' around.

4. Very sweet without the sacchrine. Lovely lovely story. I hope to see some sequels!

Reviewer: sgakaz (Anonymous) · Date: 20/05/08 - 01:02 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

Sweet and lovely

Reviewer: Romyra (Anonymous) · Date: 16/05/08 - 10:29 pm · On: No Explanations Necessary

Oh god this is right up my interests and boy oh boy did it hit home. I like the way you worked in John's return and the conflicts that they had in the beginning. I also feel totally evil in that I'd really like to see a backstory that details the first and second times between Koyla and Rodney, since I'm assuming that the one above was the third.

This was a great tale and I really enjoyed reading it.

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: 16/05/08 - 07:40 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

aaaaaaaaaaawwwww. That was awesome--so much fun. Thank you!

Reviewer: Amalthia (Anonymous) · Date: 16/05/08 - 06:54 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

I had fun reading your story. :)

Reviewer: chaps1870 (Anonymous) · Date: 16/05/08 - 02:18 am · On: No Explanations Necessary

I just so loved this story and it was done so well. I wish that it went on forever.

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