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Caffiends Asylum
We're just that sick
Reviews For Twice Over
Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) · Date: 29/06/10 - 01:06 pm · On: III

I love the Beckett family and they are supportive. Thank you guys for writing because I really enjoyed this.

Reviewer: Bethynyc (Anonymous) · Date: 21/06/09 - 09:21 pm · On: III

This was so lovely and well done. Despite all the horrible things that happened to them, you made Rodney and Grant so very real and lovable. Thank you for Jack Harkness being Rodney's sexual instructor--he did it with such tenderness and care. Thank you for this whole story!

Reviewer: Teleen (Anonymous) · Date: 23/02/09 - 10:26 pm · On: III

A wonderful AU - I loved it and am sad to see that there won't be more parts, :(. I also loved to see Jack Harkness show up - I could see him behaving in precisely that fashion. I hope that someday you all will stretch out to Torchwood fic. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: MeMyself'NEye (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/09 - 03:11 am · On: 1

You guys keep coming up with the best AU ideas for the Gate characters! I'm enjoying finding more stories centering on Carson and Rodney. I've grown weary of the Rodney/John arcs. Loved that you fit Grant (Jansky) into this one as a McKay's twin.

Reviewer: Korilian (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/09 - 10:18 am · On: 1

Wonderful story. It's not hard to guess where you got your inspiration from and I'm glad you ran with it.

It also throws a whole new light on his first meeting with Carter. Underground and faced with a strong intelligent woman? Ouch. No wonder he blew it so spectacularly.

I'm also kind of impressed how you've written Carson. I admit, I never really liked the character much. The mother henning and over responsibility always irritated me, but by showing us where it comes from, you really made me sympathize with him.

Reviewer: Laryn (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/09 - 05:14 am · On: III

I've spent the last three nights reading this story, and enjoying every sleepy, cross-eyed moment of the experience. This was another wonderful story, well done!

Reviewer: Chris (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/09 - 05:02 am · On: III

Oh, man. The Christmas scene just made me cry and cry. *sniff* Thank you!!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 19/02/09 - 12:24 pm · On: 1

is it finshed?? its a realy great story

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: 17/02/09 - 06:12 pm · On: III

Nice story. I really like how you handled Rodney and Grant's physical relationship, and Carson's discovery of it. You did a great job showing that even though Rodney and Grant were twins, they each had their own unique reaction to what had happened, and their own path to recovery. And the details of life in the 1980s rang true.

Reviewer: jayceepat (Anonymous) · Date: 16/02/09 - 08:37 pm · On: 1

Well, you all have done it again. Made me go away to another time and place and completely immerse myself in your world. It was horrible and wonderful and so believable. Like others, I would so love to see a sequel to this. It just doesn't seem possible that the brothers could project the facade of normality as well as they are after all they've gone through. I love to read your stories. I'm a beta for several other authors and it's second nature to read looking for errors. When I read stories here, I'm lost in the world you create for me and if there are errors, they don't manage to get through the plot and the characters to bedevil me. Thanks again for a wonderful morning.

Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous) · Date: 16/02/09 - 12:00 pm · On: III

There were some errors in the story, but over all once again you created an emotionally intense, well written in contents story. I had to read it all as I was drawn into the characters and I loved the relationship you built between Rodney and Grant, while adding Carson into that mix. A wonderful job. Perhaps you'll consider a sequel in the future where we get John/Rodney and someone for grant and Carson.. Thanks for a great read.

Reviewer: mangst1969@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: 15/02/09 - 10:01 pm · On: III

This was intense, disturbing, comforting, cute and hopeful all rolled in to one well written package.

Reviewer: bellewhan (Anonymous) · Date: 15/02/09 - 02:16 pm · On: 1

Thank you, I’ve spend the last three hours reading this story. It will be one that I reread as a print out.

I don’t pretend to know anything about the psychology of abuse, but Rodney’s feelings/confusion and way of attempting to find about how he should feel by going to the bath house (and meeting Capt. Jack) was realistic. Capt. Jack as a step in for a future John Sheppard was inspired.

Reviewer: Ladyholder (Anonymous) · Date: 13/02/09 - 08:24 pm · On: 1

This was very different... And I really hope that the boys get the help they need. Also, I can understand the *why* of what they did, plus Carson's squimishness too. Thanks for the excellent writing.

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