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Caffiends Asylum
We're just that sick
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: 29/08/10 - 11:16 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

Awesome story. Loved everything about it, just can't wait to see where that doodle leads to!

Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous) · Date: 07/07/10 - 05:22 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

Ack! Does this mean a sequel? because it stopped there. With the Doodle. And Doodles have caused things. Lovely story though. I adore the trio.

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Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) · Date: 29/06/10 - 02:34 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

*Squees* I love a happy ending. I think this is really mushy and satisfying.

Reviewer: Khara (Anonymous) · Date: 01/05/10 - 05:16 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

Omg I am so glad I found y'all's website again!!! This was so well done like every story I have read from y'all in the past. I am now going to reread everything.

One small little and probably only applies to me thing. The huge one chapter formate make it really hard to read on mobile devices, ie the iPhone.

Reviewer: merwy (Anonymous) · Date: 18/04/10 - 06:26 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

this is fantastic and cheering and thank you so much for this. I would really love to see more in this universe (or really, in any of your universes, because you just write soooo well). I really like how both the SGA and CSI guys are so well characterised, with lots of fabulous little details. Good job!

Reviewer: Blue (Anonymous) · Date: 25/02/10 - 01:04 am · On: First Sign of Madness

Very good! :) I really like the John-in-Rodney's head thing. And I wouldn't have thought to put these 3 together, but it works very well.

Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: 22/02/10 - 08:45 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

After the initial skim of this fic a few days ago I was for sure that the return of John and Greg being back in Vegas meant Greg with a broken heart. So glad I came back and actually read the fic because I am coming away feeling so good that what I assumed was a one off threesome was actually turning into a true relationship. Lonely Greg always makes me wanna cry, so glad that he has both John and Rodney to give him the attention that he desperately deserves.

Reviewer: Nadine (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/10 - 06:26 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

What a great combination of the canons of these two shows. Loved Greg's and John's voices especially. A very interesting ending. Sounds like there's a sequel in the works, I hope?

Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous) · Date: 21/02/10 - 03:36 am · On: First Sign of Madness

Love!

Reviewer: sperrywink (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/10 - 11:54 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

Amazing story. I loved the way you incorporated canon and Greg and Rodney and John were delightful together.

Reviewer: Nate (Anonymous) · Date: 20/02/10 - 10:44 pm · On: First Sign of Madness

This was seriously awesome. I clicked the link feeling slightly dubious about how the two worlds could work together and how Greg/McKay could possibly work, but holy wow did you make it work.
I loved the stuff with John, just enough clues to give an idea that it wasn't just in Rodney's head and then the realisation of the spy while John had gone quite. I felt everything Greg felt as he thought he was going to have to back off for John. And the sex was seriously hot.

Just a little confused about the issue of the cat (McKay took a cat out to the Mountain with him and then it wasn't mentioned again, then near the end Greg is thinking about how McKay wants a cat). I would definitely love to see a sequel where we find out more about Greg's doodling habits and what they mean.

Very nice work :)

Nate (azure_chaos on lj)

Nate

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